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Nombre: wlp (Firmado) · Fecha: 22/10/2016 07:09 · Capítulo: Gungnir, 15 Años de Guerra, Episodio 1, "Espada, El pueblo sin futuro"

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Nombre: Cindy_Neko_Chan (Firmado) · Fecha: 02/03/2013 00:11 · Capítulo: Gungnir, 15 Años de Guerra, Episodio 5 "Gungnir, La Lanza Maldita"

Hola me gusto  mucho la conti, la verdad ahora si me atrapo la historia :D

gracias por contestar mi comentario y aclararme esos puntos n_n

Yo se que es tu estilo escribir asi y bien por ti, cada quien escribe loq ue siente y como se desarrolla mejor su historia, bueno serpa que tal vez yo estoy mas acostumbrada a la narrativa nn' bueno de taodas maneras me gusto y espero el siguiente cap XD

pero que no mate a las pixies!!! yo amo las hadas T.T



Respuesta del Autor:

Muchas gracias por seguir siempre con nuestra historia!

 

Cualquier duda o sugerencia, con gusto es aceptada.

 

Jejeje, pero los Pixies no son Hadas :P



Nombre: Cindy_Neko_Chan (Firmado) · Fecha: 27/02/2013 08:11 · Capítulo: Gungnir, 15 Años de Guerra, Episodio 3, "Ataque y Contraataque, El Corazón del Oprimido"

Hola, aqui te va una critica constructiva:

Para empezar, es "salvajes" no "salvages" pero bueno, a todos nos pasa n_n, en segundo (y no te ofendas es solo mi opinion) en ningun momento leí gore, ni mal uso del lenguaje, había violencia pero no lo suficientemente descriptiva para clasificarse como gore...

Tambien hace falta un poco más de narrativa y descripción de los personajes, son muchos dialogos y eso hace que se pierda el interés, sinceramente hubo cosas que no leí por que me aburrí de tanto dialogo u.u

También, en los combates ponle las cosas a Giulio un poco más dificiles, él mata a todos muy facilmente y la verdad eso tambien aburre un poco... bueno, al menos a mí.

El fic se ve prometedor, y escribes bien como para lograr algo grande, son sólo esos pequeños detalles. Bueno creo que eso es todo, ya me despido que ya es tarde...

Ah, yo creí que Jill era mujer XD digo, por Jill Valentine jejejeje XP Por cierto ¿cuándo salen los zombies...? (Te confieso que eso fue lo que me llamó la atención del fic XP) Soy fan de los zombies :D

Hablando de eso, si te gusta Resident Evil y las parejas raras, pasate por mi cuenta.

Que tengas buena noche n_n

Nos leemos!!!



Respuesta del Autor:

Gracias por tu comentario.

 

1) Lamentablemente, no poseo Microsoft Word (Problemas) asi que uso el OpenOffice, el cual no me ayuda mucho en ortografia, por lo tanto encontraras muchos errores de ortografia, lo siento.

2) Mi forma de escribir Fanfic no es tan Narrativa, si no mas bien, los personajes hablan por si mismos para contar todo suceso.

3) Todos mis Fanfics son largos, realmente yo escribo de 10-12 paginas un Fanfic normal, en el cual es cierto que se pierde el interes, pero me he acostumbrado de esa forma.

4) No te preocupes, espera a llegar donde los Trolls, Pixies y demas, te daras gusto con los combates.

 

El Gore aparece pero solo en ciertos episodios, los ultimos (7, 8, 9 y proximamente 10) son los que llevan mas y si sigues con la historia, al llegar a la saga de los Pixies, veras mas aun.

 

El mal uso del lenguaje viene hasta muuuuuucho despues, pero pongo las notas para advertir que contiene (O contendra) lenguaje no apto para todos).

 

Los Zombies llegan al terminar la saga de los Pixies.

 

Vere tu Perfil.



Respuesta del Autor:

Gracias por tu comentario.

 

1) Lamentablemente, no poseo Microsoft Word (Problemas) asi que uso el OpenOffice, el cual no me ayuda mucho en ortografia, por lo tanto encontraras muchos errores de ortografia, lo siento.

2) Mi forma de escribir Fanfic no es tan Narrativa, si no mas bien, los personajes hablan por si mismos para contar todo suceso.

3) Todos mis Fanfics son largos, realmente yo escribo de 10-12 paginas un Fanfic normal, en el cual es cierto que se pierde el interes, pero me he acostumbrado de esa forma.

4) No te preocupes, espera a llegar donde los Trolls, Pixies y demas, te daras gusto con los combates.

 

El Gore aparece pero solo en ciertos episodios, los ultimos (7, 8, 9 y proximamente 10) son los que llevan mas y si sigues con la historia, al llegar a la saga de los Pixies, veras mas aun.

 

El mal uso del lenguaje viene hasta muuuuuucho despues, pero pongo las notas para advertir que contiene (O contendra) lenguaje no apto para todos).

 

Los Zombies llegan al terminar la saga de los Pixies.

 

Vere tu Perfil.



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